Nile's Story - Feedback Request

[Seret Sajet]

Hey All,

I've slowly been feeding parts of Nile's background into the Rumbling's forum and I could use a little feedback on whats there so far.

Here's the thread:
http://swgtales.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=90

I'd just like to know if Nile's story has caught your interest. Are you eager to learn where else this story takes him and how he becomes the Docturnus of Nocturnus? I'm having fun intertwining his story into the major events we've held amongst our town (And chaning his signature image as the story progresses).

Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks!

[Coiyonite Adaks]

I thought it was great. A perfect well balanced story that gives me some depth on how I can relate to this guy in rp.

Coiy

[X'an Shin]

It's boss. I loved it.

It was better than Cats.

[Dwilah]

I like what I've read so far...'course, I didn't know him before... =)P

[Seret Sajet]

Well I kind of pulled a memory wipe on Nile. He was a friend of Zannon's who played on and off and eventually gave up on the game. I decided to take over his account to have a Doc and Musician buffer in town at all times and to have a new and different character to RP with. So bascially everyone is meeting Nile for the first time and everything else before this with Nile never existed.

Thanks for the feedback so far, much appreciated.

[Skarr]

I heard that planet Landess IV is frickin kick ass place....why would he ever want to leave?

(opens the door for the jokes to commence)

[Zannon]

I heard that planet Landess IV is frickin kick ass place

Are you kidding? I heard it looks and smells just like Terre Heute...I suprised he stayed there as long has he did.

[TramelRaggs]

I heard that planet Landess IV is frickin kick ass place

Are you kidding? I heard it looks and smells just like Terre Heute...I suprised he stayed there as long has he did.

Y'know, I live in a city that has steel mills, and we still don't smell as bad as Terre Heute.

[Nyase]

Very nice! I especailly like how you added the "Imperial Void" on the lisence at the end.